Hey! Great job, it was very accurate and informative. Not bad at all for writing it in fifteen minutes. I really liked the structure and order. Good quotes too. The only improvements that could be made that I noticed were a couple of punctuation errors.
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Hey! Great job, it was very accurate and informative. Not bad at all for writing it in fifteen minutes. I really liked the structure and order. Good quotes too. The only improvements that could be made that I noticed were a couple of punctuation errors.
-Dave
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